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Favorite Activities : Writing, Listening to Music, Graphics Design, Modding, Gaming, Watching Anime, Hanging with Friends, Singing, Photography, Music Composition and Sleeping
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PostSubject: Betrayed   Sun Feb 05, 2012 3:57 pm

I wrote this back when I was 16, even my english teacher at the time couldn't interpret it, i'm proud that I was able to write a poem with enough imagery and alliteration to fool my english teacher, if you guys can figure out what it's about, tell me and i'll rep you up.

Why was I not good for her?
Our life together snuffed out in a quick blur
That peaceful lonely morning the day after it was done
Felt so empty without the warmth of her love
Trudging along the daily rush not stopping to examine what was new
His entire persona had been changed to a shade of dark blue
Too focused on the rigid past of his life
The end of their pact carved down with a knife
Plunged into the darkness they went
Once her dreadful message had been sent
Laying on the cold steel ground whipsering into his ear
"I shall love you forever more my dear"


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